Describing a picture

Describing a picture 

            This is a link to the video I've made when I was describing a picture of my short holidays in Altay last summer. 

  link for the video    
            Things I like: 

• I'm speaking freely.
• I'm making almost no mistakes while speaking.
• I'm trying to keep eye contact.

          Things that should be improved:

• I shouldn't touch my hair.
• It's better not to look away and I should look at my listeners.
• I'm producing strange sounds with my lips or mouth like smacking and it's not what I should while speaking.