Evaluating speech "Useless Info", its content component

I. Introduction

As an attention-getter is used a number of rhetoric questions and there are the answers for them as a link element to the thesis statement. The introduction is highly sufficient and impressing so the mark is 10 out of 10.

II. Body

The information is well organised with the use of  linkers (firstly, secondly, thirdly). Every single thesis is presented in separate paragraph and such a simple structure facilitates understanding of the idea and its main points. Point-support is given as appropriate, complete and variable and there are lots of facts, illustrations and personal examples presented.The information is coherent. The mark is 10 out of 10.

III. Conclusion

Some rhetoric questions are used in the conclusion as a special technic to draw listeners' attention to the end of the speech. There are summary, action and emotional appeal given so the conclusion is highly effective. I would rather put 10 out of 10.

Strengths: high organization quality that facilitate understanding and draw attention to the topic, emotional appeal of the author.

Weaknesses: lack of advanced vocabulary, vocabulary and structures simplicity.