Evaluation of Angelina's Speech

I. Speech Content (45 points)
Organization - 18/ 20
Support - 10/15
Cohesion - 10/10
I didn't exactly catch the thing at the very beginning of the speech (to rearrange the web pages or something to make the understanding easier), what was that?

II. Speech Delivery (40 points)
Vocal presentation: 18/20
1) volume
2) tempo
3) pitch
4) emphasis
5) clear articulation
Physical presentation: 17/20
1) eye contact
2) gesturing
3) posture
4) facial expression
5) movement
6) dress
I would say the facial expression was a bit frozen, I needed emotions 

III. General Effectiveness (10 points)
Amount of time used: 4/5
Adherence to time requirements: 5/5
Creativity: doesn't seem unique 0/5
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Total points: 86/100

Things I really liked:

1. support of the info with scientific data and useful advice (I fully catched the topic, thank you so much!)
2. enough volume and tempo, fine emphases on important points
3. effective use of time
4. clear presentation of information, the presentation's really cool
5. Effective examples :)

Things I woud improve:

1. more advanced vocabulary and grammar structures 
2. clearer articulation and pronunciation as there were some errors that had made the understanding a bit difficult