Outline of Speech Updated

INTRODUCTION

1 attention getter

2 link

3 thesis statement

4 preview (мини план)

BODY

5 first main heading

-supporting material

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6 second main heading

- supporting material

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7 third main heading

- support material

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CONCLUSION

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Purpose Statement: the purpose of this speech is to persuade people that aggression they suffer from other people is caused by the people who do it to them and it is not the audience's guilt

Introduction:
According to UNICEF, one child is killed  in the world every 5 minutes. How many children do suffer from violence then? Emotional, physical, sexual? How do they live after all the abuse they experienced?
1. I'm really inspired to talk to you about the first effect such children get - aggression.
2. All of us at least once suffered from aggressive classmate or neighbour and sometimes even strangers in the street can hurt us. We tried to find a reason in our own behaviour, we asked ourselves what I did wrong? But actually the reason they treat us aggressively - their own aggression raised in childhood.
3. First I want to share a personal experience with you, the case when I was once bullied  without any reasons. Then it is important  to sort out what is aggression and what causes it.  Finally We are going to know how to overcome the feeling that you are guilt of the aggressive behaviour you experienced.
                 

Body:
1. Personal story about me and one aggressive and rude girl.
                    a. We met at the children camp one summer
                    b. She treated me aggressively
                    c. I asked her why she did it
                    d. I realised that she was rude to me even for no reason because of some problems and neglecting her family
2. I would like to present some statistics what develops aggression in people.

                   a. Exposure to abuse - physical, verbal, sexual.

                   b. Neglectful parenting
          c. Emotional trauma and stress
          d.Bullying.
          e. Family history of violence.
          f. Watching violence in the media
          g. The presence of weapons in the home
          h. Playing violent video games
          i. Mental health conditions.

3. They all are not your fault. The reason why they are aggressive are their background.But how to overcome the feeling that there is something wrong with you?
                      a. be confident of yourself
                      b. be aware of reason what cause aggression

                      c. mind only your state of mind
                      d. never act aggressively back
                      e. forgive and pity the aggressor!

Conclusion:
1. At this step you know my personal story of emotional abuse which was not the only case, we discussed some reasons what cause aggression and you know how to stop feeling guilt of aggressive behaviour aggressor treated you. Now we can see that people behave aggressively for different reasons but we need to pity them as they are unhappy and never treat aggressively back.